Hello there! You have worked wonderfully!!! Your stories were so imaginative and creative! You are fantastic writers! Please, read your own work and your partner´s work, leave comments on their work and which story you like best! :)
Here is your work, for everyone to read and enjoy:
Ana Ceraldi and Andrea Perez from Adults 4C wrote:
Sun is a Chinese four years old CHINESE girl, she lives with her parents and her older sister in La Plata since last year. Although she is a very nice person she doesn’t know anybody to play with, so Sun spends the day watching TV and playing with Kiko, her dog. She sometimes stays in front of the window looking outside specially when the neighbors, two boys that seems to be her same age, play football together. Sun wants to be his THEIR friend and play with them but she is very shy so it´s very difficult to FOR her to go and introduce herself.
One day Sun was watching TV and she fell asleep, she haD a beautiful dream in which she and the two boys were the best friends and promiseD that they wOULD ALWAYS be together, although everyone forms EACH OF THEM FORMED a family and became old.
When Sun wOke up, she called Kiko and go WENT outside to meet her new friends.
Claudia Pascual wrote:
Ringo is a dog. He lived with his owner five years. One day he stayed alone because suddenly she died in a car accident. Since that day, he had to live by himself. He started hanging around, sad, without a home, looking for a place to live, watching the days going by. One day, he realized that he couldn´t go on like this. He must keep on going. So, Ringo began TO look around him, to the people passing by. He made a decision: he would find someone to take care about OF him: a new home, a new owner. He had got four options. The first one: a young marriage that seemed to be really happy together. The dog thought that he could be happy with them. But he decided not to take this option, when he saw how the man kicked a dog from the streets really hard, when the animal had come to him to receive some kind of affection.
The second alternative: two children who everyday went to the park to play soccer. Ringo gassed GUESSED that they could not be brothers or cousins, because the colour of their skins. At last, Ringo rejected that option, because he took in that the two young boys were extremely hyperactive and noisY. They seemed to have got “the devil inside”.
The thrith THIRD alternative was about a couple: an old mAn and an old woman. Although they were really kind and loved animals, Ringo preferred not to choose them, just because they were already very old, and that way, Ringo would be just like in the beginning.
The last one: a nice little child. That seemed to be the best option: she was very young, sweet and loved dogs. She was kind and spent most of her time alone in the house, because her parents worked outside the city and came back home late at night. So, Ringo finally chose the girl. One day he spent the night by the door of the girl´s house, hopping HOPING that the family would take him. And so they did.
Maria Fernanda Ceballos and Susana from Ad4A wrote:
The lost pet
Peter and Carola met at University and they fell in love. When they graduated they got married. Two years later they had a baby and they named her Victoria. She grew up. She was a funny girl and she liked watching cartoons on TV and playing with her dog Coco.
One day, when it was foggy, Coco got lost in a big park. Victoria felt very sad and she cried a lot . So, her father and Sam, her grand-father went to the park to look for the pet.
After two hours, the pet appeared near a big lake. The dog was very afraid and cold but when it saw the men, it started to way WAIL a tail. Peter and Sam took the dog and they came back home.
Victoria felt very happy when she could hug Coco.
Paula Giovannone and Jonatan Nini wrote:
The lost dog
One Evening two old brothers WERE walkING In a foggy forest, like all days AS THEY DID EVERY DAY, and THEY SAW see a beautiful dog, it lookED lost. They took the dog because it WAs funny and sweet, the brothers trIED to look for your ITS owners, but it WAs an expensive dog, for this reason the brothers put an adverstiment in the newspaper.
One week later a lot of people appearED, interestED in the dog : A JUST-MARRIED couple just married, two friends and a litTle Japanese girl, but this WAs imposSible because just one of them WAs his owner, so the brothers gatherED all people and leave LET that the dog choose.
Finally the dog chose the Japanese girl because she called it with his name.
They BOTH lookED very happy!!!
Silvina DeNegri and Sandra Rivero from Ad4A wrote:
THE FIVE PICTURE STORY
Sarah and Peter live in San Francisco. They met in an important party about ten years ago, and since that moment they fell in love.
Sarah is twenty five years old; she is a very pretty woman and she works as AN engineer in a big factory, located near San Francisco.
Peter is older than Sarah, but only four years. He is a handsome and clever man; he is a very important architect of San Francisco and he works whit WITH his father, who is the president of the company.
They got married eight years ago in the Cathedral of San Francisco. They moved to a big house whit WITH an enormous park. They decided to buy a dog because they love pets, and they called it Bob.
Two years later they had a girl, Mary, who is the family’s joy.
Now Mary is a girl who draws and paints very well; there are a lot of drawings painted by her in the house. She likes drawing children very much.
Mary is the preferred of his HER grandfather; they always walk around the park, sometimes whit her father too. They enjoy every moment that they shared together.
Carolina Farias and Marisa wrote:
One foogy FOGGY morning two old friends, Robert and David were walking in the Park
They spoke about Carla, Robert´s daughter. She got married with a businessman called John. They lived in another city from SINCE they married and Robert really, really missed her.
Robert looked after her dog (Tom) since she left the home to GET married. And Tom was great company for him because Carla was his only son and her mother HAD died A long time ago, for that reason they were so closer, so the dog Tom was very important for Robert.
One day Robert was tIdying Carla´s room and he found a picture of hIS daughter when she was a child and decided to send IT TO her as a present for her new house. Then he found another more picture. There were two young boys, IT WAS FROM such a long time! And they were he and David. He couldn´t believed it! They grew HAD GROWN up together, and they even STILL continued their friendship like AS IN their childhood.
Emiliano Esposito from Ad4B wrote:
The lost dog
One night, some years ago, two men were in a dark park with a suspicious package. When the night was ending, they puted PUT the package between the trees and go WENT out into the fog.
The next day, after the school, Tom and George went to the park to play football and when Tom kicked the ball near the trees he found the package and shouted to George, amazed. While they decideD if THEY SHOULD open or not the package OR NOT, it started to move and bark. –It´s a dog, said George, -What are you doing here? Said Tom.
George was living in a flat, and Tom in aN old house with a huge park, so Tom took the dog to his house, made a doghouse and called IT Pipo.
One years later Tom was 10, he and Pipo were a very good friends, until Tom left the door of his house open and Pipo started to run away.
Tom was very sad, suddenly a girl appeared with Pipo in her arms. Her name was Monica and she was beautifull.
From that day, they fell in love and NOW they have plans to get married in a not too distant future.
Martin Ramon and Marina Ibarra wrote:
A Bad luck day story.
Two friends, Rómulo and Rogelio take a walk through the park in a cold and foggy day. Both walk in silence until Rómulo sayS:
- LasT week I had a bad lucky day.
- Why? What happened to you? Rogelio said.
- Last week, I looked after my two grandsons Tobias and Braulio. How AS the weather was sunny, we decided go to the park to play football. We played about a half an hour, then Tobias kicked the ball strongLY and it endED under a bush. When I went to take the ball, suddenly a dog came to me and bit my leg. Dumb dog!. What´S THE matter whit WITH you?. I said. I know you! You are Amelia’s Dog. Amelia is THE owner Chinese supermarket OWNER´S daughter. After that, I went quickly to the hospital to held my leg HAVE MY LEG SEEN BY A DOCTOR. The hospital was full of people. While I was waiting for a Doctor, in fRont of mE was a couple who had HAD a motorcycle accident. Due the blow the boy looked lost and asked again and again “And Candela?” (His daughter) “and the motorcycle”?. THERE WERE Also was a people coming from a weeding, all poisoned by bad food.
Then Rogelio Said:
-You weren’t the only one with a bad luck, that day.
Rocio Davel (Ad4B) and Anabella Mocciaro (Ad4C) wrote:
Thanks for the dog
Peter and Paul were friends. A sunny day they were playing football in the park, when suddenly a dog came to them. The kids startED to play with the dog. The time was passing and the kids were going away from the park. When the evening came they were lost. All the family looked for the children. Charlie, Peter’s father, found them with the dog; he had a chain whit WITH his address. Charlie went to this address with the dog and knocked on the door of the house. A little Chinese girl opened the door, and behind the girl a woman appeared. They were Sara and Mary and the dog was Sara's dog. After this episode, Mary and Charlie began a friendship and with the time they gOt married.
Sindy Licette Piñero wrote:
This history happened in a very nice country of Australia….
Michael and Helena were very GOOD friends. When they were children, Michael played football with you’re HIS friends and Helena was borED because he never paid any attention to her.
They grew together, until that one day, he loved her but she didn’t love him. He was EE.UU IN USA for TO study Medicine and because he didn’t see her.
In EE.UU USA , he knew MET a woman WHO WAS very beautiful and A good person, but he never could forget to her BUT HE COULD NEVER FORGET HER.
She found out that Michael was with another woman and she traveled to USA to meet him. When he saw her, he proposed marriage and she very happILy said: “Ok course!!! I always was in love whit WITH you, but I always refused it, I’m sorry”. After that, they married and were one HAD a very nice daughter. Her name is Mary. Besides, they bought one A dog to FOR her and all THE family lived happILy for ever.
Emanuel Frati, Pablo Lanfranco and Jorge Cogo wrote:
In a little town from Buenos Aires, lived two children, Pablo and Jorge , who were great friends and enjoyED a lot playing together A LOT. Every afternoon, after class Pablo used to go to meet Jorge, and both used to go to the square to play soccer. Jorge always took his dog pelusha with them. Each time that the ball went out from BOUNCED OUT OF the square, pelusha ran follow AFTER it and then tOOK it BACK. One day, while they were playing, Pablo kicked the ball and it went to the street. Then pelusha crossED the street, without LOOKing, and a distracted man overODE it with his car. It was so sad when pelusha died, but WHAT WAS worse was that Jorge blamed Pablo.
Then, they stopped BEING friends, and life separated them, because Jorge’s father had to move to another town TO work, and the whole family moved too.
But, the life’s wheel turned and Pablo’s son fEll in love with Jorge’s daughter . They didn’t know the story. When their families met, although a lot of time had passed, Pablo and Jorge recognized each other. Immediately, they forgave each other and started to laugh because each of them saw the old beST friend in the other. Both knew THAT although they had gained a few friends along life, the beST friend was always on THAT FROM childhood time. They remembered sadly how have to be THEY HAD separated too SO much time for a silly thing. Hence, they became to be friends again, and NOW enjoy playing with their granddaughter , and to sharING old age .
Matias Garcia wrote:
Two friends an a fight
This is a story about two friends and a fight. This story happened 60 years ago in England. There were two close friends, who played football every day. One evening they were coming back to their houses and they met a dog in an old wood. It was a beautiful dog. They decided to find the dog’s ownER. Two days later they found the ownER: she was a beautiful girl called Yoko Ono. Both friends fell in love, and they started to fight. Finally, 10 years later, one of them (John) got married with Yoko: this was the biggest and last fight between the friends…
40 years later, John found to his old friend (Paul) in the same old wood where the problem between theM had started. They talked FOR about two hours and they became to be friends again (or THEY BEGAN TO BE FRIENDS AGAIN). The problems are, of course, dogs and girls... :)
Rocio Viollaz and Jose wrote:
STORY
Tim is a man who has a problem. He is going to GET married, but his girlfriend doesn’t know that he can’t have children. So he decides to ask his father for some advice. His father tells him that he haS to tell that to her before the wedding.
Carry, his girlfriend, accepted and they had a beautiful wedding.
On their honeymoon they decided to adopt a child. Tim preferRED a boy because he wantED to play football with him. One day, they went to a house for TO meEt a child that they could adopt. Tim didn’t know that the child was a girl. Fortunately the two things that the girl loveD WEre football, because her favourite cartoon was about a football team, and dogs.
Vanesa Sanz, Victoria Sanz and Romina Tamone wrote:
Allie was a little girl when she met Mark. She was taking her dog Chipi for a walk and Mark was playing football with his best friend Brad when he saw her. The love was born immediately (THIS DOES NOT SOUND TOO ENGLISH) IT WAS LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT/ LOVE APPEARED INSTANTLY. They grew up together and got married when they finished their careers COURSES OF STUDY (REMEMBER, CARRER IS YOUR WORK EXPERIENCE, AFTER YOU GRADUATE). Allie became a famous Doctor and Mark became an important businessman.
The friendship between Mark and Brad has never ended. They spent a lot of time together and this doesn’t like too much to Allie BUT ALLIE DOESN´T LIKE THIS TOO MUCH. She hated Brad. One day Allie was furious and injected Chipi with the virus of Rabies. She planed that Chipi bit Brad PLANNED THAT CHIPI WOULD BITE BRAD / WANTED CHIPI TO BITE BRAD. But something unbelievable happened…
One day Chipi went away to the forest. Brad and Mark, without tellING to Allie, went to look for it. When they found it, the dog had foam in its mouth. They wanted to catch it but Chipi bit them.
When Allie knew that, she wanted to die but it was too late. Mark and Brad were too ill, and after a couple of days they died. They continued their friendship at IN Heaven, like Gun’s and Roses song: knocking on heaven’s door.
Fantastic work everyone!!! Keep it up! :)
